Poetry - Visceral Pirouette + Triste - by AzureSkyy
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AzureSkyy <cruel_reality@hotmail.com> June 2, 2006 - 8:46pm | |
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Comments, people, comments! I'm going out on a limb here, posting these. <3. Want me to post more, dont like them, think they're alright, think they dont belong here ... Cmon. Let's go. ^.~ | |
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kutulu <kutulu@otakumail.com> June 2, 2006 - 11:37pm | |
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Well its been awhile since I've posted here so im not quite sure whats appropriate or what doesnt belong here, though I can say I did enjoy the poetry. Despite it being somber, melancholic, and morbid. :) | |
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kutulu <kutulu@otakumail.com> June 2, 2006 - 11:37pm | |
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Ah, nvm. They went and added your own section for this. :P | |
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AzureSkyy <cruel_reality@hotmail.com> June 3, 2006 - 12:09am | |
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Rofl ... Well ... Sorry it doesnt appeal to your tastes. ^.~ Mine run dark and deep. This is softcore stuff. <3 | |
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jhyde June 5, 2006 - 1:53pm | |
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Well, if I were to pick favorites, Triste is my number one. It's flowing and thick with imagery. Two things good poems must absolutely have. I loved the ending, so mysterious! | |
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AzureSkyy <cruel_reality@hotmail.com> June 5, 2006 - 2:34pm | |
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*smiles* Thankee. | |
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