I loved the first one and the third one! I'm a great fan of poetry, but I haven't read anything real since you started posting, thanks for the chance!

*smiles warmly* I'm glad you enjoy them. I'll post every 3 days or so, so I dont flood the page, lol. There's plenty more to come.

I have a small request when you're submitting poetry. Please choose "Full HTML" and then format it like this. Of course you can space your lines however you like, but the <pre> tag is the important part. Please do this instead of Semi-HTML, or including a <br> at the end of every line.

<pre> Title of poem Author

Line 1 Line 2 Line 3

Line 4 Line 5 Line 6 </pre>

<hr>

Grr, that doesn't look like I wanted to show.. but basically, Full HTML, formatted the way you like, surround with <pre></pre>

Alright. Will do. ^^

The email you sent it as worked better. The spacing was fine. No problems, I'll remember to do those things.

The last one really stands out to me. It has a great flow and feel to it. There's nothing particularly wrong with the first ones, they just feel more song-like than poetic. And besides the last one has alot more metaphors and I just love metaphors in poetry. :)

I was thinking about sharing something I made but its so simple and small compared to what you have going here...

*smiles warmly* Hun, you need never be intimidated by anyone's work, much less mine. What you have, small or large, intricate or simple .. It's still art, it's still a work of your own ... Don't be embarassed or scared. Show it to all of us, or, if you like, you can just one-to-one share it with me. Whatever you like.

Well im not sure if it's quite intimidation or lack of quality on my part. Either way i'll share. :P

:b well, those're the more common-ish, semi-safe-to-assume rationalizations ("but its so simple and small compared to what you have going here..." ?), so, I figured I'd go with them, rather than try to divine some possibly more accurate ones, and just let you correct me instead. ^.- I'm glad you've decided to share.